The paper has been revised by the professor, you will see everything in highlighter that needs to be fixed. The first writer the wrote my paper did not write a proper introduction. Please make sure a proper one is written and add citation if necessary. Throughout the paper there will be mistakes here and there. But at the bottom of the paper the professor explains how the structure of each paragraph should be. Add more specific examples where needed using the citations provided. Or properly add citations/sources if needed to make it easier on you.