Read the feedback and try to fix the essays ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Essay # 1 feedback: Date is not MLA format. Do not bold titles What is Betty Frieden's work you refer to in the intro? Logos is logic, but more than that. Logos uses facts, definitions, numbers, statistics, etc. How does Frieden use that in her writing? Pathos uses emotion. How is she using emotion? Avoid introducing sentences with vague pronouns like "it" Use double quotes, not single quotes. Don't reference specific paragraphs by pointing them out in your writing, just cite with page numbers, --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Essay #1 feedback: Date is not MLA format Don't bold titles Don't put article titles in all caps Use the authors' last names when introducing article quotes Need more in-text citations even if you're paraphrasing. Works Cited not MLA formatting. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Essay #3 feedback: These are not the MLA formats for the current MLA edition. This edition is from before 2016. All article titles need capitalized