hi Writer, I will be submitting the same next week. you have done the re-writing for me. however please have another look at it and make any necessary changes needed, maybe you have missed something. 2 files attached 1- Uni points ( guidance ) 2- Revised - the one you have made the changes based on the first attachment, however please have a look again and do any necessary changes. I cant afford failing at this assignment for the second time.